Lyric fragments you came up with

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Lyric fragments you came up with

Postby AEIOU(y) » Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:17 am

POST EM!
we can share them, talk about them, all that shit. i have come up with lots of little modest mouse inspired lyric fragments, but never really did anything with them.
got anything to share? :D
am i really all the things that are outside of me?
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Re: Lyric fragments you came up with

Postby Chief Tragedy » Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:28 am

cant figure out how to delete. :[
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Well we all led the charge,
`Til we ran aground in our party barge.

And every little gift was just one more part of their grift,
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Re: Lyric fragments you came up with

Postby AEIOU(y) » Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:52 am

Awesome! yeah i like that, tiny tragedy. ^_^

I guess i was suposed to post one. hahaha shit i wrote them all down in my notebook but i dont have it with me :/ i am staying at a family members house tonight, sleeping in a makeshift bed with makeshift "goodnight"s that arent even normally there.
so im kinda... feeling makeshift i guess! Ill post some tomarrow, if im home. who knows where ill end up.:D
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Re: Lyric fragments you came up with

Postby Boo Boo Kitty Fuck » Thu Dec 22, 2011 1:37 am

I'm looking for critique but don't bite. Or do, just try and be constructive so I can look at your teeth marks and say I learned something about teeth or biting or some shit.

Ash sways from side to side
Billowing smoke dances in the night
Floating up and lining the sky

We're lost in the foliage
The fire cherries and dies all over
Laughing and whispering the answer

In the brush monsters loom
They want to carry you away
The light bled by the moon
Won't illuminate the water of the bay
But horizons spark
Hotel lights fight to make their mark
Hotel lights fold and fight the sky


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Re: Lyric fragments you came up with

Postby bachelorbrown » Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:19 am

this got reblogged on my tumblr

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it’s more about writing good shit,
which makes you part of it,
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