The Poetry/Lyrics Thread

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The Poetry/Lyrics Thread

Postby Zack_of_Steel » Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:58 am

Figured, being that we're all MM fanatics, you'd all appreciate some poetry or song lyrics. I'll post some of mine to start. Let me know what you think and definitely post whatever you have stored away.

Violence, the flavor of life
Ripping, tearing, the lust for blood never stops
Unwelcome bullets sprinkle their victims
No time to think, soldiers running

War, the world's playground
Choking, Burning, the time is right
Intruding fog infects the field
Divided they stand, united they fall

Death, the inevitable outcome
Waiting, hiding, everyone is dying
Invasive pain rains down upon the field
One wrong step, you're shot in the throat

Life, the wasted effort
Gambling, spending, men die needless deaths
Unwanted orders assassinate the innocent
In a blink of an eye, the grave is made

The idiot of the masses, the man in charge
Ruling, drinking, the black gold quenches his thirst
Undesirable war is waged
Lie down in your grave, he calls

Lie down to waste

Death's kiss, entrance to darkness
Shattered sky, bleeding lamented tears
Atrocities are wrought upon forsaken souls
Castoff captives find solace in slow breaths
Sinners denied passage to the hallowed grounds

The never ending abyss, prison for the fallen
Skulls on stakes, gateway's adornments
Weeping men clutch and grasp at the air
Innards ushered forth from abdominal cavities
Frightened eyes plucked from screaming sockets

A never ending road, winding to infinity
On and on and on and on
Burning, dismembered limbs litter the deathly trail
Cataclysmic fire blazes
The Dark Angel's wrath rains down

A horrible cycle, marring life
Again and again and again and again
Pleading lips, uttering shrill appeals for death
Charred flesh is torn away
Death does not come

Usually wear glasses, but today I didn't.
Wore my blind eyes and decided to film it.
Ate a whole lot of the media's bullshit.

Ran around town and I blamed the bull pit.
"Obsessed." they said, but they were the culprit.
Eat shit, bitch, for you are the unfit.

Watching, waiting, for every word.
Living, seeing, fucking absurd.
Sitting I notice, life incomplete.
Breathing, apparently, dies a dead beat.

Climb aboard, friend, we're all on this ship
Have a slice of meat; the maggots left it
Sit down here and leaf through a light read
Don't worry about anything, it's all up to me

Join the crew, fiend, he's down below deck
Have yourself a knife, perfect to carve neck
Slip down there and make quick of your work
Don't worry for him; he's an obligation to shirk

A spatter of life, and then quite a few more
But a matter of seconds before tide turns to floor
Humility in droves froths forth from the wound
But a matter of moments before morals impugned
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Re: The Poetry/Lyrics Thread

Postby UncleBunnyFace » Sat Apr 09, 2011 9:49 pm

Nice zack I really like the last untitled one. Heres my attempt at writing something lol

no name

time gos by slower and slower,
as my eyes get heavy, my flesh gets colder,
I empty my stomach and watch the sky spin and bend,
such a beautiful blur of colors, I feel death creeping up,
just keep my eyes open, take it second by second,
this cant be the end, this cant be the end
take in every sound every smell for it might be the last,
I cant keep going, i guess its finally time to rest,
I shut my eyes and watch the most amazing show,
as I slowly drift away to a endless plane
To my surprise I later awake
This is the end of the beginning and the beginning of the end

not finished

Trudging down the streets while my mind drags its feet
I make it to this place but thats only half of what I face
I make it back home and manage to climb a mountain of stairs
As I prepare this poison I cant manage a trip down to the sink
I pull water from the cats bowl then as the cold steel hit mys arm
I know im alright nothing can hurt me, but its all an illusion
Im in a fractured reality, everytime is the last,
They're definitely not watching their holiday spirit coagulate in a spoon. I didn't speak to a single person today. I thought why should I ruin their fucking Christmas. ~ Nikki Sixx
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Re: The Poetry/Lyrics Thread

Postby ThomasJacobReich » Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:29 am

Well, these are what I've come up with so far for a song I made up the other day. Just what I came up with screwing around, tweaking it now and then. I'm not a great guitarist, but I don't play for anyone but myself anyway (well, I've jammed with my brother a few times, but I'm not about to sing this :P).

The world's all full of points
I don't think I've got one

The world's all full of points

I don't think I've got one
I don't think that you do either

A freshly sharpened pencil's got one
A conversation might
A triangle's got three
But me ... zero (or) no

The world's all full of points
I don't think I've got one

The world's all full of points

I don't think I've got one
I don't think that you do either

A good view's got none
A shooting star's got none
A rainbow's got none
So at least we're in good company

Looks shorter than it is I guess, there's some short stuff with no lyrics, and the spacing is sorta representative of that. And I'm not sure I would end it there.
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